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		<title>Microcopy: The forgotten persuader</title>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 24 Aug 2011 01:33:06 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Snappy Sentences</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[A few weeks ago I presented at Interactive Minds on the topic ‘Optimising your web content to perform’. While I think some people were expecting me to talk about SEO, I instead focused on what you can do to optimise your content to convert visitors to customers. I talked about some of the techniques you [...]]]></description>
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<p>A few weeks ago I presented at Interactive Minds on the topic ‘<a title="Optimising your web content to perform" href="http://www.interactiveminds.com.au/page/Events/Brisbane_past/10th_August_2011/" target="_blank">Optimising your web content to perform</a>’.</p>
<p>While I think some people were expecting me to talk about SEO, I instead focused on what you can do to optimise your content to convert visitors to customers.</p>
<p>I talked about some of the techniques you can use to identify your most important content, how to tell if it’s performing or not, and what to do to help it perform better.</p>
<p>One of the tips I gave to help boost content performance was to improve microcopy.</p>
<h2>What’s microcopy?</h2>
<p>Think of all of the small pieces of in-context content which help visitors perform a task on your website.</p>
<p>It’s often an overlooked part of content development because it’s found on error pages, forms, buttons and other elements which may not be part of the ‘main’ content areas.</p>
<p>For example, if you have a shopping cart on your site you’ll most likely have microcopy to assist customers making a purchase. It may be a couple of words about which credit cards you accept, advice that shipping is a flat rate, or even tips on creating a password.</p>
<h2>Why is microcopy important?</h2>
<p>Good microcopy smooths the pathway to conversion. It reassures, it informs, it clarifies. It helps the user engage with the site. And an engaged user is far more likely to convert than a non-engaged one.</p>
<p>On the flip side, bad microcopy can confuse, frustrate and erode trust. Think of a bad shopping cart experience you’ve had. Have you ever abandoned a purchase because of something simple like not knowing if postage is included or not? I know I have.</p>
<p>Or, have you ever got an error message on an online registration form—but no clues as to what went wrong? Do you persist, or do you leave the site?</p>
<p>In both of these situations some well-written microcopy could have helped you stay on the site.</p>
<p>So next time you’re planning a content project, spend some time thinking about your microcopy and how it can help convert your visitors.</p>
<p><em>If you want to know more, I suggest reading Joshua Porter’s post on <a title="writing microcopy" href="http://bokardo.com/archives/writing-microcopy/" target="_blank">writing microcopy</a>. Or, if you have a content project coming up which requires microcopy, <a title="Contact Snappy Sentences" href="http://www.snappysentences.com/contact-snappy-sentences/">get in touch with me</a> so I can help.</em></p>
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		<title>Big copywriting projects – 5 things to ask your copywriter</title>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 15 Jun 2011 03:51:31 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Snappy Sentences</dc:creator>
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<p>Many events prompt a big copywriting project. It may be a website redevelopment, a branding exercise, or even a new product launch. In any case, you suddenly find yourself faced with a mountain of content which needs to be reviewed, refined, and (most likely) re-written.</p>
<p>Thankfully the powers that be have given you a budget to hire an external copywriter to help with the work.</p>
<p>Now from a copywriter’s perspective, big projects are a completely different kettle of fish than a quick-turnaround brochure or web page update. They require far more planning and often a different approach. You really need to understand how a project works, and how your component (the writing) fits in with everything else.</p>
<p>Often, you need to do far more non-writing activities like content audits, schedules, and stakeholder interviews than you’d otherwise allow for.</p>
<p>So from your point of view, when it comes to selecting the copywriter for your big project, make sure you ask them these questions to see if they&#8217;re going to be the best fit for your project.</p>
<h2>Have you worked on a big copywriting project before?</h2>
<p>A copywriter who understands the basics of project management will be easier to manage than one who doesn’t. This includes things like stakeholder engagement, scope changes, and risk management.</p>
<h2>Do you have a day rate?</h2>
<p>Personally I find it easier to work on a day rate for big projects because you have to be more fluid with the timing of deliverables. Allocating which days you’ll be working makes it easier for the project manager to schedule meetings and allocate tasks.</p>
<p>When quoting for big projects I break the project up into a number of core deliverables, each with an estimated amount of days. I then identify key milestones to re-assess if the days are still realistic.</p>
<h2>Have you allowed enough time for feedback?</h2>
<p>This is an important one. From my experience, the best-planned content project can still be de-railed by rounds and rounds of feedback. Even if you stipulate your hours only cover two rounds of feedback, some organisations simply don’t work like that (no matter what they say). So you have to be flexible and adapt along the way, and that’s why I use milestones to re-assess how much work can be done in the time allocated (see the question above).</p>
<h2>What happens if the scope changes and there’s additional work to be done?</h2>
<p>Find out if your copywriter has other copywriters who can be called on, or if they have the capacity themselves to take on the additional work.</p>
<h2>What’s your availability after the project is scheduled to finish?</h2>
<p>Delays are common. Don’t get trapped by having your project run over time and then losing your copywriter because they are already booked immediately after your project finishes.</p>
<p>What’s your experience with big copywriting projects? Have they gone to plan?</p>
<p>Share your thoughts below.</p>
<p>&nbsp;</p>
<p><em> I can help you with the content strategy and copywriting components of your next content project. <a title="Contact Snappy Sentences" href="http://www.snappysentences.com/contact-snappy-sentences/">Send me an email</a> to get in touch.</em></p>
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		<title>Why writing great web content is like selling gloves to rich ladies</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 11 Apr 2011 04:02:49 +0000</pubDate>
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<p>A week after finishing my last exam at university I packed my bags and left for London. I wasn&#8217;t interested in working in my chosen career (which at that stage was PR)—I just wanted to have fun and travel.</p>
<p>I ended living in a big share house in Camden, and working at the very upmarket department store <a title="Simpsons of Piccadilly" href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Simpsons_of_Piccadilly" target="_blank">Simpsons of Piccadilly</a>. Have you ever seen the show <a title="Are you being served?" href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Are_You_Being_Served%3F" target="_blank">Are you being served</a>? Well it was based on that very same department store.</p>
<p>It was awfully proper, and I was in charge of selling gloves.</p>
<p>Posh, expensive gloves.</p>
<p>It was the type of place where ladies from the country (actually I should say Ladies, as often it was Lady so-and-so) would come and purchase a whole wardrobe of clothes while their husbands were measured up for new suits. Such a different world.</p>
<h2>How does this relate to web writing?</h2>
<p>Well, the key to a sale with these rich ladies was quite often asking them the right questions before we’d even started looking at the gloves. The same can be said for copywriting—if you ask clients the right questions before the project starts you are much more likely to get a positive writing outcome.</p>
<h2>Where will you wear the gloves?</h2>
<p>Yes, on your hands. But in what situation? A special occasion? Wedding? Driving? Long walks in the freezing countryside? Understanding what conditions the gloves would get exposed to was an important part of fitting the right type of glove.</p>
<p>From a content point of view, I ask:</p>
<ul>
<li>What’s the purpose of the content? Is it help content? Is it sales content? Is it news?</li>
<li>How does the content help the visitor complete a task on the website?</li>
<li>Will the content be used for anything else? A fact sheet, brochure or the like?</li>
</ul>
<h2>What other gloves do you already own?</h2>
<p>Most customers wanted gloves which were different to pairs they already owned. So even though they were after some warm, lined gloves—they wanted brown rather than black.</p>
<p>From a content point of view, I ask:</p>
<ul>
<li>What other content is already on your site?</li>
<li>How will this new content fit in with that?</li>
<li>What other online (or offline) marketing are you doing which will impact this new content?</li>
<li>Do you have a brand guide?</li>
</ul>
<h2>How much do you want to spend?</h2>
<p>Some of my glove customers never looked at the price tag (or their credit card bills probably), but other ‘normal’ people off the street did have a budget to stick to and our beautiful soft leather cashmere-lined gloves were probably beyond what they could afford.</p>
<p>From a content point of view, I ask:</p>
<ul>
<li>What’s your initial copywriting budget?</li>
<li>How do you plan to maintain your new content? Will this be resourced internally or externally? Do you need a style guide to help maintain the content consistently?</li>
<li>Do you have existing content to go from, or does all this new content need to be written from scratch?</li>
<li>What other material will need to be updated because of this new content? Will that be done now or later?</li>
<li>Do you need an editorial calendar to plan your content?</li>
</ul>
<p>Over to you—do you normally think about these things when developing new content? What have I missed?</p>
<p><em>I’m happy to ask you all of these questions for your next copywriting project. Simply <a title="contact Snappy Sentences" href="http://www.snappysentences.com/contact-snappy-sentences/" target="_self">get in touch</a> and I’ll give you a quote.</em></p>
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		<title>Sales secrets from a food lover</title>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 02 Dec 2010 05:23:13 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[This week I went to a pantry tour at Black Pearl Epicure. It was for Brisbane Food Bloggers, and although I don&#8217;t have a food blog I figured I really do love food and was very keen to learn more about it. The demonstration was hosted by Black Pearl&#8217;s founder Babak Hadi, and was simply [...]]]></description>
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<p>This week I went to a pantry tour at <a title="Black Pearl Epicure" href="http://www.blackpearl.com.au/" target="_blank">Black Pearl Epicure</a>. It was for Brisbane Food Bloggers, and although I don&#8217;t have a food blog I figured I really do love food and was very keen to learn more about it.</p>
<p>The demonstration was hosted by Black Pearl&#8217;s founder Babak Hadi, and was simply amazing.  Babak took about 30 of us through the ins and outs of extra virgin olive oil, different vinegars (including aged balsamic &#8211; yum!), salts, chocolate, saffron, vanilla, and cheese.</p>
<p>We all left with a full belly and a better appreciation of how these staple ingredients are made.</p>
<p>So what does this have to do with writing?</p>
<p>The stand out of the night (in my mind) was Babak&#8217;s knowledge and passion for his products. He was really interesting to listen to, was very confident in what he was saying, and had answers for a couple of curly questions that were asked.</p>
<p>This knowledge and passion are the foundation for successful sales.</p>
<h2>1. Know your product</h2>
<p>Babak explained everything from how extra virgin olive oil was made, to the fermenting process of balsamic vinegar.</p>
<p>You should know your business and your products that well too. Describe it in your sales pages, detail it in your customer service info &#8211; show your customers that you&#8217;ve taken the time to learn.</p>
<h2>2. Understand how your customers will use your product</h2>
<p>Throughout the demonstration, Babak related all information to how we would use the products ourselves. This is a great technique for selling as we all were picturing using the product in our own kitchen before any purchase had been made.</p>
<p>Unfortunately, this is an area where I see many businesses fail. There are a lot of business owners who are really out of touch with their customers &#8211; make sure you aren&#8217;t one of them!</p>
<h2>3. Love using your product</h2>
<p>Sure the foods we sampled were all top-notch, but Babak has a genuine love for using them all. When you are excited about your own products or services, it acts as a reinforcement for potential customers. The old &#8220;I&#8217;ll have what he&#8217;s having&#8221; mindset.</p>
<p>So after all that eating (erm, learning), what did I buy? Check it out:</p>
<p><img class="alignnone" title="Black Pearl goodies" src="http://www.snappysentences.com/wp-content/uploads/2010/02/blackpearl.jpg" alt="" width="369" height="276" /></p>
<p>Note: I did get some chocolate too, but it was gone before I took this picture!</p>
<p><em>Are you passionate about your products? Share your thoughts below.</em></p>
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		<title>Which comes first, the design or the content?</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 27 Sep 2010 05:28:40 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[When you are working on a project like a new website, direct mail piece, or brochure it&#8217;s quite common to have a design &#8216;mocked-up&#8217; before you have started writing the copy. In fact, for most web projects I work on, the design has already been signed off before I even provide a quote. This can [...]]]></description>
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<p>When you are working on a project like a new website, direct mail piece, or brochure it&#8217;s quite common to have a design &#8216;mocked-up&#8217; before you have started writing the copy. In fact, for most web projects I work on, the design has already been signed off before I even provide a quote.</p>
<p>This can be problematic.</p>
<blockquote><p>If you want truly persuasive copy with a strong call to action, it&#8217;s much better for the designer to see what content needs to fit on the page prior to commencing the design.</p></blockquote>
<p>For example:</p>
<ul>
<li>There&#8217;s no use developing a layout that only has small content boxes if you want long sales copy.</li>
<li>If your call to action ends up being a newsletter sign-up, this has to be reflected in the design.</li>
<li>Different header and body styles may need to be supported in the design &#8211; content is more than paragraph text.</li>
</ul>
<p>Get the content written first. Be happy with the tone and language. Decide on the style.</p>
<p>It all influences the design.</p>
<p>And a final point: Once the design has been finalised and the content added, get your copywriter to have another look. The transition from a Word document to proper layout is a big one, and sometimes some minor tweaks to the words will make all the difference to the impact of the final product.</p>
<p>What do you think? Do you start with the content, or always have the design done first?</p>
<p><em>If you&#8217;ve got a copywriting project coming up, get in early and </em><em><a title="ask for a quote" href="http://http://www.snappysentences.com/contact-snappy-sentences/" target="_self">ask for a quote</a> so I can start work on your content before the design is finalised.</em></p>
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		<title>Choosing the right testimonial</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 26 Jul 2010 04:14:02 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[The right kind of testimonials can do wonders for business.  Here are some tips.]]></description>
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<p>Testimonials are great. Nice words from a happy customer can go a long way to help persuade a new customer to do business with you.</p>
<p>But some testimonials are better than others. Here are some tips when choosing which testimonials you&#8217;ll use:</p>
<h2>Get testimonials from the type of customer you like working with</h2>
<p>Like attracts like &#8211; and potential customers want to see if you have experience dealing with other people like them. So if you like working for big corporates, put their testimonials first. If you want to work with more business coaches, then get some of their words up front.</p>
<h2>Use your testimonials to address doubts or concerns</h2>
<blockquote><p>It seems like a lot of work.</p>
<p>It&#8217;s a long way for me to travel.</p>
<p>I&#8217;m not sure if I can afford it.</p></blockquote>
<p>A good sales process has momentum. You don&#8217;t want little snippets of negativity slowing it down.  You don&#8217;t want the customer to pause (with any doubts) or hold back because you don&#8217;t answer their concerns.</p>
<p>Use your testimonials to address the potential stumbling blocks of doing business with you.</p>
<blockquote><p>I thought it was going to be really expensive, but I made my money back in new business in no time.</p></blockquote>
<h2><strong>You have a to start somewhere</strong></h2>
<p>Not everyone feels comfortable writing testimonials. Even if the project has been a total success and everyone is happy, you may still find it hard to get something in writing. That&#8217;s fine, use what you have with the aim to replace them with better ones as they come along. In my opinion some good words are better than none at all.</p>
<p><em>Are you comfortable writing testimonials? Leave a comment below or go to my </em><a title="My portfolio page is full of copywriting testimonials" href="http://www.snappysentences.com/portfolio/" target="_self"><em>portfolio page to see some of my copywriting testimonials</em></a><em>. I am in the process of updating them, but as I said above &#8211; some good words are better than none at all.</em></p>
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		<title>The art of persuasion &#8211; communicate and influence</title>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 23 Jun 2010 09:37:12 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Tickets have gone on sale for the next Networx event The art of persuasion &#8211; communicate and influence featuring Marissa Tree and myself. If you are Brisbane on 28 July 2010, consider coming along to listen to us speak about how you can develop and refine your communication tools so that people sit up and [...]]]></description>
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<p>Tickets have gone on sale for the next Networx event <a href="http://networxevents.com.au/brisbane/events-tickets-networking/view/57">The art of persuasion &#8211; communicate and influence</a> featuring Marissa Tree and myself.</p>
<p>If you are Brisbane on 28 July 2010, consider coming along to listen to us speak about how you can develop and refine your communication tools so that people sit up and take notice.</p>
<p>We are going to give lots of practical examples (it won&#8217;t all be theory), so you&#8217;ll walk away with tips and strategies that you&#8217;ll be able to apply easily within your business.</p>
<p>See you there!</p>
<p>Cheers</p>
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		<title>Persuasion is not a dirty word</title>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 20 May 2010 02:43:33 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[I am speaking at a Networx event in July with the wonderful Marissa Tree on the topic of Persuasion. The idea is we are going to go through different methods that you can use to persuade people to get them to do what you want. I was sharing this with a friend, who looked at [...]]]></description>
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<p>I am speaking at a <a title="Networx" href="http://networxevents.com.au/brisbane/" target="_blank">Networx</a> event in July with the wonderful <a title="Marissa Tree" href="http://connectucation.wordpress.com/" target="_blank">Marissa Tree</a> on the topic of Persuasion. The idea is we are going to go through different methods that you can use to persuade people to get them to do what you want.</p>
<p>I was sharing this with a friend, who looked at me, rolled her eyes and said</p>
<blockquote><p>&#8220;You mean you are going to tell them how to trick people.&#8221;</p></blockquote>
<p>I was actually quite shocked.</p>
<p>Then by chance I saw an advertisement on TV for an upcoming current affairs show that was going to &#8220;expose the tricks that supermarkets use to get you to buy more groceries&#8221;.</p>
<p>It all sounds so negative.</p>
<p>Sure, there are unscrupulous people out there who deceive and lie about their products or services, and as a result consumers feel ripped off.</p>
<p>But I firmly believe that if you have a great product or service that is relevant and useful for your audience &#8211; then what&#8217;s wrong with ensuring you do you best to sell it? It doesn&#8217;t even have to be something for sale. You may want people to register for community consultation, download a whitepaper, sign up for a newsletter. Whatever your <a title="call to action" href="http://www.snappysentences.com/writing-tips/cracking-your-call-to-action/" target="_blank">call to action</a> is.</p>
<p>Sometimes understanding just a little about the psychology of persuasion will make a huge difference to your conversions.</p>
<p>What are your thoughts?</p>
<p><em>If you are in Brisbane on 28 July 2010, keep an eye out on the Networx site for ticket details.</em></p>
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		<title>Snappy tip: Choose your angle and stick to it</title>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 12 May 2010 11:14:23 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[(Short and sweet post tonight.) Although you may associate the term &#8216;angle&#8217; with media releases or news articles, it&#8217;s also an important concept to keep in mind when writing other forms of communication. By choosing an angle and sticking to it, it&#8217;s easier to focus on what your key message is. To see if you [...]]]></description>
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<p><em>(Short and sweet post tonight.)</em></p>
<p>Although you may associate the term &#8216;angle&#8217; with media releases or news articles, it&#8217;s also an important concept to keep in mind when writing other forms of communication.</p>
<p>By choosing an angle and sticking to it, it&#8217;s easier to focus on what your key message is.</p>
<p>To see if you have stayed true to your angle check your headline, opening paragraph, any quotes you&#8217;ve used, and your call to action. Do they all follow your angle? Yes? Well done.</p>
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		<title>I&#8217;ve launched a content strategy site</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 10 May 2010 00:00:27 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[As some of you know, I have a strong interest in not just copywriting but web content strategy too. So much so that I&#8217;ve launched a new website and blog:  www.webcontentstrategy.com.au This new site will be my outlet to explore topics that aren&#8217;t just about copywriting. Things like usability, information architecture, strategy, and other resources. I&#8217;ll [...]]]></description>
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<p>As some of you know, I have a strong interest in not just copywriting but web content strategy too. So much so that I&#8217;ve launched a new website and blog:  <a href="http://www.webcontentstrategy.com.au" target="_blank">www.webcontentstrategy.com.au</a></p>
<p>This new site will be my outlet to explore topics that aren&#8217;t just about copywriting. Things like usability, information architecture, strategy, and other resources. I&#8217;ll also be writing lots of book reviews.</p>
<p>Drop by if you get the chance.</p>
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